Rebellious Angel (#Wattys2016)

Rebellious Angel (#Wattys2016)

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Angie8177 By Angie8177 Completed

It all began with a promise

While his good friend lay in his arms dying, the last words that came from his lips were 
"Please find Brienna and take care of her."
He was entrusted with his friends' young daughter.
With that promise,  Gavin has come to realize that he agreed to more than he bargained for. He never imagined this young child could grow into a such a defiant beauty bent on avenging her fathers death. She fought with him, disobeyed his every command , had a rebellious nature that unnerved him but, with it all conquered his heart.

The day Brienna's father died she swore the man responsible,  Lord Alrec Defoe would pay. She vowed no one stand between her one desire. Until her heart betrayed her and became an ally to Gavin. Between ardent battles of wits and fiery words. Her defiance angered him. But, her beauty and passion melted his heart. Slowly but surely she was going to lose this battle of the heart to him.

What a dramatic and beautiful start !! Its surely the start of a great book....i think
Not so bad, I like her rebellious nature it makes her strong and not someone who would quickly yield to a man. Girls with backbone are the best they make things more interesting.
duchessdome duchessdome Aug 24
I love the beginning very intriguing... I can't wait to see how it goes
gynosko gynosko Jan 22
Pls what is the name of the movie that was shown as a video clip in the first chapter
Narhym Narhym Oct 10, 2015
Just wanted to post a comment here after I finished reading it , this book is amazing and I love it so much anyone who wants to read it I guarantee that they wouldn't be disappointed ^^~ So keep on reading :)
SteveBevil SteveBevil Jan 23, 2015
Wow! That was a great beginning. It was quick and straightforward but told me a lot in a short period of time. I like the last line the best. "Now, I find myself at the tip of her sword with my heart in hand at her mercy." Bravo!