Rebellious Angel (#Wattys2016)

Rebellious Angel (#Wattys2016)

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Angie8177 By Angie8177 Completed

It all began with a promise

While his good friend lay in his arms dying, the last words that came from his lips were 
"Please find Brienna and take care of her."
He was entrusted with his friends' young daughter.
With that promise,  Gavin has come to realize that he agreed to more than he bargained for. He never imagined this young child could grow into a such a defiant beauty bent on avenging her fathers death. She fought with him, disobeyed his every command , had a rebellious nature that unnerved him but, with it all conquered his heart.

The day Brienna's father died she swore the man responsible,  Lord Alrec Defoe would pay. She vowed no one stand between her one desire. Until her heart betrayed her and became an ally to Gavin. Between ardent battles of wits and fiery words. Her defiance angered him. But, her beauty and passion melted his heart. Slowly but surely she was going to lose this battle of the heart to him.

HisPrincess1802 HisPrincess1802 Feb 07, 2016
What a dramatic and beautiful start !! Its surely the start of a great book....i think
InfinityLove77 InfinityLove77 Nov 14, 2016
Not so bad, I like her rebellious nature it makes her strong and not someone who would quickly yield to a man. Girls with backbone are the best they make things more interesting.
Hocwriter Hocwriter Jan 10
Don't listen to the bad guys out there! You are AWESOME! The people who say your story lacked depth are probably pathetic writers who are just plain jealous of your awesomeness. :) Stay strong, we're here for you.
harshpreet harshpreet Dec 29, 2016
Hey dont let urself b bothered by such ppl.. look at the no of likes u hav.. the number is of ppl who hv read u book and let that b a source of positive energy to brush aside such ppl..
notblair notblair Jan 02
Oh I'm sorry you've had to face this, darling. ☹️ Don't give up!
duchessdome duchessdome Aug 24, 2016
I love the beginning very intriguing... I can't wait to see how it goes