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NOW AVAILABLE ON AMAZON!

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Please note this version on Wattpad is unedited. 


SEQUEL TO "The Subway"

After the subway incident all Gemma wanted to do was put the past where it belongs. Behind her. 

It's been five months since Gemma literally had to fight for her life alongside her now boyfriend Archer Daniels on a NewYork subway train where she and Archer, along with all the other passengers aboard the train, were held hostage by five men wearing masks and wielding weapons.

Now all Gemma wants to do is get on with her life and forget about everything that happened, and what better way to do that than to take a trip and get away? Not just any trip either. Her senior trip.

Gemma and Archer, along with their whole senior class are prepared for their senior trip to Hawaii.

A week in Hawaii alongside your boyfriend, bestfriend, and the rest of your graduating class, what could go wrong?

The answer is everything. 

Why?

 There is one uninvited guess on this trip who has unfinished business to settle with both Gemma and Archer.All Rights Reserved

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