The Archangel's Daughter (Book 1 of The Angel Chronicles) EDITING PROCESS

The Archangel's Daughter (Book 1 of The Angel Chronicles) EDITING PROCESS

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Alpha.Female.Buttercup By Triszjhkha Completed

What if God gave you another chance to live, not as a mortal, but as an angel… an angel of death. Huntress Matthews, the violet eyed girl, never knew what a normal life is. She was constantly surrounded by responsibilities, guards, and assassins. But heaven was watching her, they were watching her way too much, as she was taken away to be the chosen daughter of Archangel Michael, Aengelle. Can she handle the responsibility she herself chose while juggling family, mortal responsibilities, gangs, fallen angels, attempts on her life and teenage drama? And it’s just past breakfast...

Snow White ate another apple and was allergic and died
                              Cindy slipped and fell on her shattered glass slippers,
                              And the princes became Acholics and died
                              The end 
                              *bows
CarolineTell CarolineTell 5 days ago
Love the concept and mythology of the story so far, and the fact that the writer knows to capitalize "Creator." This paragraph could use some grammatical editing toward the end though.
sh3ry25 sh3ry25 Apr 25
Could someone tell me how to pronounce this otherwise I'm gonna pronounce it wrong the whole book series
weeksjmj29 weeksjmj29 Apr 15
I like how this paragraph begins with these words. It reminds of the story told by V in V for Vendetta. Let's see if it gets better.
rainbowrider7872 rainbowrider7872 Dec 05, 2015
I like the story but I'm having trouble following what's going on...  I'm really confused
Josielin1 Josielin1 Aug 24, 2015
'after ever after' and 'after ever after 2' .... john cozart explains exactly what happens