Sasuke returns and gets some unexpected help from an unexpecting cherry blossom. This takes place while Sasuke and Sakura are sixteen before the ninja war.
Question mark where she ask if he wants anything
Comma at no can do
got a misplaced comma at "and with that she was gone"
and aw Sakura still loves him~
might want to use italics when thinking
you have two had's when talking about Sasuke and Jugo (right?) at the gates
Good so far ;)