Cherry Blossom Series: Sharigan (1)

Cherry Blossom Series: Sharigan (1)

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Jakk Xander Moon By MrZacharyUchiha54 Completed

Sasuke returns and gets some unexpected help from an unexpecting cherry blossom. This takes place while Sasuke and Sakura are sixteen before the ninja war.

AliceXOriharaXScar AliceXOriharaXScar Jul 11, 2015
*beneath 
                              *OK
                              Question mark where she ask if he wants anything
                              Comma at no can do
                              *I'll
                              got a misplaced comma at "and with that she was gone"
                              *laid
                              and aw Sakura still loves him~
AliceXOriharaXScar AliceXOriharaXScar Jul 11, 2015
*their 
                              *figures
                              *explosion 
                              might want to use italics when thinking
                              you have two had's when talking about Sasuke and Jugo (right?) at the gates
                              Good so far ;)