D'Spayr: A Knight in the Withered Land

D'Spayr: A Knight in the Withered Land

47.6K Reads 1K Votes 7 Part Story
Joseph Armstead By JosephArmstead Completed

In a decayed and dying alien world that was once center of a vast planetary empire, an embittered rogue knight, soldier to the fallen empire, traverses a bizarre landscape discovering strange and sinister truths about the nature of the leaders he once served and about the mysterious warlords who have now carved the world into their private kingdoms.

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Wonderful cover art by Stefanie Saw: @seventhstar

hdevoe hdevoe Dec 21, 2016
Really nice world building- interested to see what happens next!
UtherHolywater UtherHolywater Nov 16, 2016
wow very good honestly really does give a sense of dread that the knight has to deal with i don't think i would ever be able to capture these emotions that you can set out coldly my good sir i salute you
yesterhaven yesterhaven Dec 11, 2016
I adore this paragraph but you could definitely cut down on the 'fat' for a better delivery.
eriecross eriecross Nov 25, 2016
The tension you created with your words in this chapter is palpable. I intend to read some more of your work. Thanks for sharing this. All the best!
ArchangelGabriel21 ArchangelGabriel21 Dec 17, 2016
Chills; funny, before I joined Wattpad, I had an idea for a story like this. Great minds think alike, I guess. ;p
yesterhaven yesterhaven Dec 11, 2016
Too many adjectives. Number of adjectives =/= quality; length or formality of adjectives =/= quality. Adding 'biblically doomed and reviled' adds nothing that 'damned' wouldn't have.