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D'Spayr: A Knight in the Withered Land

D'Spayr: A Knight in the Withered Land

49.6K Reads 1K Votes 7 Part Story
Joseph Armstead By JosephArmstead Completed

In a decayed and dying alien world that was once center of a vast planetary empire, an embittered rogue knight, soldier to the fallen empire, traverses a bizarre landscape discovering strange and sinister truths about the nature of the leaders he once served and about the mysterious warlords who have now carved the world into their private kingdoms.

Wonderful cover art by Stefanie Saw: @seventhstar

FAHyatt FAHyatt Feb 25
Del redundant phrase "that had survived the changes,(etc)" unneeded as this is what has been described prior.  Sort of hit his finger with a hammer, which was damaged now -sort of thing.
hdevoe hdevoe Dec 21, 2016
Really nice world building- interested to see what happens next!
yesterhaven yesterhaven Dec 11, 2016
I adore this paragraph but you could definitely cut down on the 'fat' for a better delivery.
ArchangelGabriel21 ArchangelGabriel21 Dec 17, 2016
Chills; funny, before I joined Wattpad, I had an idea for a story like this. Great minds think alike, I guess. ;p