Chasing Promises

Chasing Promises

12 Part Story 1.9K Reads 154 Votes
Hannah Crompton By HannahCrompton Updated Sep 27, 2012

Three pledges made on the same day in different years prove too be the downfall of those persons.
    Baranbus Carlyle, the new earl of Rochester pledges to kill every dragon in England and refuses to serve under Henry VIII.
    Francis Howard, the bastard of the Earl of -shire pledges to marry the love of his life, the niece of the Kings sickly brother Edward Tudor with whatever means necessary.
    Georgina Pierce, daughter of the wealthy knight sir Robert, made a pledge by Anne Boleyn shortly after her turning, that Anne will be loyal to her just as Georgina had once done for her.

paulhock paulhock Dec 03, 2014 01:23AM
Interesting to me as I just completed a Novel set in the time of Henry VIII's daughter Elizabeth.  Dragons are a bit of a stretch for me but I find your description of the plot intriguing.
Eamane_Seregon Eamane_Seregon Aug 06, 2012 03:43PM
Aside from the typos, this first page looks very promising. Good work
HannahCrompton HannahCrompton Jul 21, 2012 10:58PM
@beyondimagination thanks! I'm still looking for an editor so I'm having to make do with myself and others comments. Shall jump on them ASAP!
louloufritz louloufritz Jul 20, 2012 06:01AM
I'm a fan of Henry VIII... i know that is irrelevant.. but he was an interesting fellow..
angela98 angela98 Jul 19, 2012 12:01PM
You've got a whole lot of talent, I can see it! Lovely chapter :D
Your description is awesome and I can picture clearly what's going on in the story :)