Chasing Promises

12 Part Story 1.9K Reads 154 Votes
Hannah Crompton By HannahCrompton Updated 3 years ago
Three pledges made on the same day in different years prove too be the downfall of those persons.
    Baranbus Carlyle, the new earl of Rochester pledges to kill every dragon in England and refuses to serve under Henry VIII.
    Francis Howard, the bastard of the Earl of -shire pledges to marry the love of his life, the niece of the Kings sickly brother Edward Tudor with whatever means necessary.
    Georgina Pierce, daughter of the wealthy knight sir Robert, made a pledge by Anne Boleyn shortly after her turning, that Anne will be loyal to her just as Georgina had once done for her.
Interesting to me as I just completed a Novel set in the time of Henry VIII's daughter Elizabeth.  Dragons are a bit of a stretch for me but I find your description of the plot intriguing.
Aside from the typos, this first page looks very promising. Good work
I'm a fan of Henry VIII... i know that is irrelevant.. but he was an interesting fellow..
You've got a whole lot of talent, I can see it! Lovely chapter :D
Your description is awesome and I can picture clearly what's going on in the story :)
I love how you perfected the era of the plot you are working on.
                                    It made me feel as a reader that I was actually in that era.
                                    I don't know but I think your character is a bit mature for his age? but maybe in that era they were raised that way.