♦•Golden Veins•♦

♦•Golden Veins•♦

11.4K Reads 181 Votes 7 Part Story
Beth By xbethyintherainx Updated Jan 24, 2011

No matter how much make-up you put on it, evil is evil. 
They're after her blood. 
It contains a connection to a power Avril never dreamed of. 
A family of werewolves fights to protect her. A family of Vampires fights to capture her. 
Prince Chase, the essence of arrogance and heir to the Hidriac's throne captures her heart. 
Roan, wolf-boy, will do anything he can to stop Chase from sinking his teeth into Avril.

Thatcatperson Thatcatperson Aug 28, 2010
Omigosh, I really really love it. I can't believe its not on the What's Hot list, its so good. The only thing I would improve is probably just do the description of the boy a bitty better, as you only said that he had pale skin, and nothing else really. Except from that, its perfect. Love it. :)
stillhere stillhere Aug 22, 2010
I liked the beginning, and this idea is extremely original. Remember to check over your work. I wasnt confused like with most stories these days. Keep it up! Upload more!
smileforme101 smileforme101 Aug 20, 2010
woahah, i thought it would be good but that good that was great i havr no advice for it nothing needs to
DecipherDamsel DecipherDamsel Apr 10, 2010
Oh wow! I truly love your writing, its so descriptive!! Welldone, ill be expecting more chapters after I read the next few haha :) good job :)
Ruby-Dreams Ruby-Dreams Mar 18, 2010
This is great! i love it .O.
                              cant wait for the next chapter *U*
xbethyintherainx xbethyintherainx Mar 18, 2010
@deianiraisevermore: haha don't worry, when Avril finds out that she's been kidnapped on her birthday they'll be a lot of butt kicking going on.  Thanks for your comment, let me know if you have any ideas for characters, since I just started my story I'm open to help :)