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A guide to all of my works, book ideas, and reveals! Will include all of my works and book ideas, please give feedback on whether you like them. Will include reveals don...

Deceit has been going through so much pain, he just wants to end it but he can't die. He was all for cutting until the others found out... (art not mine apart from the c...

a bond that broke from a feeling that has been forgotten

Willow is gay. Like super gay. How is she supposed to tell your rude father and Gay Pride rioting mother?

This story is basically one shots of a story that I've been working on. First chapter is the basic world-building, description for the story, characters, and all that ja...

Damien Cherry was the 'bad boy' of his high school, Lofter High. He got into fights and had a shitty attendance, many plus himself, were surprised he hadn't been expelle...

All i can say about this story is that...you'll have to read it to find out, at least give it a try and give feed back!! so i know what to do to make it better this sto...

A girl named Hana (Me) shared stories in her middle school experience. (Things get complicated) With the help of her friends Ariana, Eliana, and Mia.

Orochi Tempest is a typical worker drone, wake up, snack, work, drink, work, dinner, work and sleep. But when his life takes a sudden turn when he falls asleep and wakes...

This is my first story and I can't draw to save my life. This is about my OC's experiences at UA in Japan !

Angel, Ariana,and Asia are just three normal girls. They just finished their middle school years and summer break is almost over. High school is just one week away. The...

Zanny

Dahlia Baxter just moved from the city to the middle of nowhere Maryland with her brother and best friend. Her perfect boyfriend throws her life completely out of order...

This story is about Emma Johnson struggles in life and how she over comes them.

A easy reader story based on modern situations blown out of proportion. A good mind thinking historical fiction that still needs to be finished. Check it out and tell me...

The main character is wandering around in the woods to find a old man guarding a cave warning the kid saying not to enter. The kid ignores the old man and goes in anyway...

Alphonse who goes by Al is a 15 year old boy that transfers schools halfway through the year. Follow the story to see how he blends in with everyone else [Im doing this...

hi! this is my first time publishing my work and this is just what i have of the storyline and i would love to hear your ideas and feedback i know its not that good but...

Patient 0820 was abandoned by her mother at an experimental science hospital to be tested on. When she discovers what they have done to patients in the past she is deter...