Ok I didn't expect this editing to be so quick. Anyways I'll tell you guys what was new.
- Misspelling has been fixed
- Separated speaking so its easier to read.
- Made some things bold or etc for parts I missed.
-From Chapter 1 to something... I added certain words so the relationship isn't so sudden and Tenten didn't just accept it so quickly.
HUGE CHANGE to 2 Chapters!
I have changed/ added more things to
-Chapter 20- Soon (I made it longer, plus a bit more realistic)
-Chapter 21- Birth (I mostly changed the beginning. The rest are okay.)
What will be coming up?
- More wholesome parts
- The boys does something that shocked everyone
- Tenten has made a choice
- Highschool life as a Teenage mother
- Family grows
- Wholesome Nora
- Probably extra drama
Also Holy shit 240 views!? Thank you all so much!!!!!!!
As a thanks to this much progress... I will be answering any questions you guys give me!
Feel free to ask me anything!!!!
\(^w^)/ ~<3
luv you all!