TheInnocentThief - Nothing to Lose
Title 5/5
Title is original. It fits with the story.
Description/Blurb 9/10
The blurb is the beginning of the actual piece. Though it fits perfectly and does make me want to open the book.
Cover 5/5
The cover is simple and I think it's a perfect fit and gives the reader an idea of where the narrator is.
Plot 17/20
I think the plot flows the way it needed. There is no dialogue at all, the entire piece is more of an internal monologue.
Characterization 17/20
The narrator feels realistic, as a character. The emotions felt by the character are portrayed well. The character is a tortured soul and it's easy to tell with what the reader is given.
Creativity/Originality 8/10
The plot is creative and original. I wasn't expecting that ending to be honest.
Spelling & Grammar 15/15
The prose was easy to read. I did not catch any mistakes.
Enjoyability 5/5
The story was enjoyable. I would really love to know more about this character/narrator.
Literary Devices 4/5
There were some metaphors and literary devices that made the writing interesting and flow nicely.
Description 4/5
There was a little description here and there. I could visualize the area where the narrator was.
Total: 89/100