Will u give me a second chanc...

By anaz1994

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so its my raglak ff in sr track peep in to know more abt this ff More

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part -1
part -2
part - 3
part - 4
Part -5
Part -6
part -7
Part -8
Part -9
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12
promo
part 13
part -14
part -15
part -16
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part -17 ( frustration begins )
part -18
first success (part-19)
part -20
part -21
promo
part -23
confession
messed up things
Tasting his own medicine
pretty late though alright?
OMG 😱
double 😉
character sketch (new)
part -29
part -30

part -22

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By anaz1994

Will u give me a second chance 😍

       Part - 22

Recap ( laksh got frustrated by ragini informal exict..grandpa advising laksh...ragini decide to leave baadi )

Scene begins in ragini were in taxi , she staring her phone with mixed emotions...she is swiping all photoes in it...

dhadhi photo seeing her she smiled lil...sorry dhadhimaa for leaving u like this but i don't have any other option in my hand then this...i know well how much u act like supporting swara u cared for me a lot , u can't hate me dhadhimaa...cz i am your ladoo ...your love on me is different one others can't understand it but i can...your way of showing love is strictness...you don't wanna see i am wasting my life like other girls that's y you chose an maheswari family to me unaware of my life turns to an another janaki life...i am not complining you dhadhimaa cz its not only your falut mine too...if we know things would end like this then we must stop accepting all...poor us can't predict our future right? I am sorry for you dhadhimaa i spoiled your dream ...i can't live with laksh anymore he hurted me a lot my worry is till he didn't realize anything in his life ...luv i dhadhi maa she said kissing her pic..

Then comes ap pic...you know wt maa i really consider you as my maa the one who didn't give birth to me ...i chose laksh the main reason is you..i thought your love will there for me always...i won't complain you don't like me ? I know you like me as bahu but couldn't accept me as your daughter ...may be my deeds stopping you ...even you r mistake in some places i won't dragg it anymore...but sincerelly i like u a lot maa...

Parinitha pic seeing she smiled...i really like u bhabhi...you r great support to me in that house...i saw someone who understand me there...my prayer is to see an small baby in your hand...then only chachi will shut her mouth...

Then came uttra pic...aww my cute uttu...i really love u doll...u r the best gift there for me...u supported me a lot even fight with your brothers for me...i am really gonna miss u uttra ...hope u will get marry to an handsome guy whose heart is pure like yours...luv u...

Shekhar pic came...she chuckled lil in mocking way...sorry i won't see you nd your partiality by saying she deleted his pic along with sharmishta pics...

Like swara , sujatha ,sanskar pics too without even giving time to think about them...cz she got enough from them...her hands stopped seeing laksh pic...

Here comes the laksh maheswari picture...the one whom i loved unconditionally forgetting whom i am ? Changed myself into devil...the one who made my heart bleed ....who stabbed behind my back ...do u really thinking i will delete your pic from my phone ...

Not at all laksh...if i lost my phone nd all contacts too i won't lost yours cz i wanna see you all day ...don't mistake its for my love on you but my hate towards you...

Wait y should i hate...u r not my enemy to get my hate...even u r not my enemy too laksh...mean u r nothing to me in my life though i wanna see you to motivate myself.....i must remind the throne path which i crossed for you.....so good luck laksh ...by saying she broke the sim nd threw it out of window...she breath the fresh air...

Here laksh reached on MM in mixed emotions...he is hell confused by that grandpa words...somewhere his heart aching to take it to his heart...

He walked in without making noise ....usually someone will be in hall for his surprise none there...he is least interest in it...he walked ahead but heard some sound from kitchen his attention turns toward there...he felt thirsty so he marched to kitchen ....but wt made him shocked

Swara eating food there alone...y did she eating food here....he remind sujji saying swara is not well...he sigh in least interest manner...he took water bottle nd about to move...spoon fell down from swara hand...she scared nd placed it back looking here nd there....the way she panicked made laksh confused... Who cares he thought nd rushed to his room...not realizing he is not cared about swara anymore...

He moved to take an cold shower......his word keep ringing in his mind.....

You can't even take any wrong word about your wife then how could u say you hate her ?.

Did he saying truth ? Don't i hate ragini ? No i used to hate her after her truth out he said ruffling his hair...

But ...y do i feel he is right ? God its so confusing he hits his hand on wall in frustration...better i forget everything ragini nd that grandpa words also...now my life is free no one is there to controll me..he said turns off the shower...

Laksh came out of washroom wiping his hair...he searched for comb in dressing table but found ragini clutcher...he took it in his hand nd remembered that incident.....

Once laksh returned to home in noon to take his file which he forget to take ...but he stopped seeing ragini cleaning their room ...its an hot day she is sweating a lot her in it her free hair disturbing ...she fed up with tucking behind her ears ...she took clutcher nd made bun in it revealing her beautiful neck  he never saw her in such position always used to her beautiful neck nd back with her long hair ....she starts cleaning that room...laksh stared her without blinking...but when ragini noticed his presence he took his file nd went from there scolding her for made floor slippery....ragini pout laksh never failed to notice that through window...

At present laksh stared that clutcher in mixed emotion...i still don't know y did i stared her in that way...i lost in her for some minutes....he took deep breath nd placed tjat clutcher inside the drawer...he combed his hair ...soon he got call from sanskar

He picked it..hello sanskar

Lucky where r u ?

In home bhaii ...wt's the matter ?

So u r in house right ? Enjoying with swara ? He thought to himself...his mind planning to do something against laksh...

Did everyone in home ?

No bhaii

Swara informed me that she wanna go to hospital can u take her to hospital laksh ? I am little busy now
Laksh got irrittated for no reason..bhaii i can't something come up urjently...i will call u back he disconnect the call immediately..

Sanskar stared his mobile in confusion...y did he behaving strangely...

Even laksh sat on bed confused...wt happen to me ? Is this me i doubt ?

I used to search for an oppurtunity be with swara always ? But y do i feel frustrate in her matters now...i don't like to take her out ?

Wait...today morning i even shout on her...arrey yrr she is ill but i feel least interest in her matters ..y this sudden changes in me ?

Arhh its so confusing me he said walking here nd there...

On the another side swara filled her stomach full without anyone knowledge but poor swara doesn't know laksh saw her already...she got call from sanskar ...he informed to her that laksh was there ask him to take her hospital...she nodd

Swara smirked...so laksh is here only we two r here ...i can do anything to bring him in my way..poor laksh already working hard to get an place in my hear...just wait nd see how your heart gonna pound in my closeness ...she covered her in shawl nd turns her face into sad...... She knocked on laksh door

Who is this now ?

He open the door to see swara there...yes swara wt do u want ?

She coughed fakely...laksh can u drop me into hospital..i feel so weak today ...no one is in home to take care of me ...please laksh i asked sanskar but he said some important meeting is there...

Ok he nodd disintersted...u please sit in car i will come down...she nodd

She smirked in victory
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Laksh came down nd saw swara in passenger seat ...somewhere it hurts him unknowingly...don't know y he remembered ragini in that place... He sat beside her awkwardly...its new feelings to him....swara acted like she is helpless to wear seat belt...laksh can u help me ?

His expression changed when she asked such help...he remembered the way ragini suffered to put seat belt ...their eyelock...

What's happening to me y do i keep remembering ragini today...

Swara expected some romance but laksh kept distance nd pulled the seat belt in force ...swara smiled fakely nd nodd thanks

Laksh starts to drive concentrating on road...swara turns on the song laksh didn't mind...

Its romantic song right laksh ?

I don't think so he replied...

She is keep talking to him but its giving unpleasant feelings ...her talk irking him today unsually...is this making sense ?

I think you r guilty laksh for scolding me in morning that's y u couldn't face me right ? Its ok i forgave u she said smiling

Not at all swara he said in lil attittude ..

Means ?

Means wt ? Y should i be guilty swara ? U stormed inside my room without my permission ...i was changing don't u think its not manners ?

Swara never expected this from him...i am sorry she muttered

Wo laksh she about to start...laksh said swara i feel head ache can u please sleep for sometimes ...

Ok i will she turns away...he sigh in relief...

Wt did she thinking about herself ? Did ever i entered into their room mannerlessly...how dare her to enter into my room when i am changing dress now she blaming me ...he thought irrittatedly...

Wait wait...did i got angry she saw me changing ?  Yeah honestly i got angry for that only...but i never felt angry on ragini for this...she saw me changing several times in our room...i never shouted on her for this...its not awkward also ...i like swara more then ragini but i am not comfortable with swara like ragini ......its strange...do i really like swara? Or i like ragini ?

Crazy i am...wt's happening to me its so weird ...i must sleep well ...i am thinking a lot today cz lack of sleep he convinced himself not understanding he is changing...

He dropped swara in hospital...swara u meet doctor i will ask uttra to pick u..

But laksh i ...

Sorry i am busy now...i already informed to uttra she will pick u...bye..

Laksh drived off... While going ragini car coming opposite from laksh...

Laksh saw ragini in it...soon that car crossed him...laksh thought its his hallucination...unaware of she is going far away from him ...

Screen froze

Precap : strong feelings

Guyz leave ur cmnts about this epi

How many liked ragini pov ?

Do u feeling ragini is right keeping laksh photo ?

About laksh confused mind ?

Did sanskar success in manipulating laksh ?

Wt about swara insult ?


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