So I gotta admit, I'm kind of upset about this...
I've always been really self conscious about my writing and it sucks for someone to just literally come out and say that your story isn't good enough by their standards. I'm sorry that they didn't fall in love in 0.5 seconds, but that isn't how love works. I wanted to make it realistic.
I think I just need a break from this story for a few days. I'll update soon, don't worry guys. I just need a bit of time to think because I'm already dealing with problems with one of my friends and this didn't make me feel any better. Having someone literally tell people not to read my story just didn't help.
I'll probably update sometime in the next few days.
So... Bye, I guess.