You're up 2000 words by now. Your next 1000 words will be your third set up. By now, we should have met the main characters. We can visualize them because you've given us good descriptions.
Give us something new about this world and the people, and build a little on what we already know. As a reader I'm still interested in this world and how it works.
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Story Structure
Художественная проза**COMPLETED** If you want your story to flow like a good movie, you need to make sure the right things happen in your story at the right time. Story Structure will help you to plan your story and ensure that key elements of story telling are always...
