Adored by the Alpha

Thoughts?

So I was wondering: What are your thoughts about my story?

I know, I'm sorry, it's not an update- I wish it was too. But I'm working hard on the next one. But as a 'writer' (if I can call myself that) it's also really important for me to know what you guys think about my stories- except for the comments about how much you love it and want me to update (those are a real nice boost to my ego though)

So what I basically wanna know: what do you guys think about my story- every aspect of it? Like, are the characters relatable and understandable? Is the plot a little boring?

Basically, what should I do to make my story better? What would you like to see more of? What can I do, to basically make sure you guys don't get sick of my story and quit reading?

I'm sorry, but that's all for today, I love you all so so so much, and I hope you're having a great night/day whatever.

And please write your suggestions, I welcome them with open arms- but please be nice. A kind mind is a fine mind.