Welcome to Arcane's Critique Shop version 2.0!
"Critiques are perceptions."
√ Offers constructive criticisms and feedbacks.
√ Giving suggestions, corrections and advices to your work.
√ Neatness, Formality, Grammar are all a must.
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🎀 BLURB:
Typical. Not that catchy, but the pure Filipino/Tagalog language that you used was somehow the thing that will entice the readers to read more.
🎀 PLOT:
Your plot, your business. For as long as you can justify the story, it's alright. I don't have a say on that one.
🎀 CONTENT:
Poetic. The rhyming patterns are awesome. And I didn't expect it to be written that way. Especially the pure Filipino/Tagalog language that you used. The language is flawless, only that there are some words that needs spacing; e.g. paba. Which is supposed to be 'pa ba'. But other than that, nothing else.
🎀 MESSAGE FROM THE CRITIC:
I must commend tou for your language. I mean, not everyone else is using pure Filipino language when it comes to writing, and I must say that you're quite versed in that department.
