Welcome to Arcane's Critique Shop version 2.0!
"Critiques are perceptions."
√ Offers constructive criticisms and feedbacks.
√ Giving suggestions, corrections and advices to your work.
√ Neatness, Formality, Grammar are all a must.
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🎀 BLURB:
Brief and bloody, on point and well-carfted. Very good. I've read a blurb this short but is so blood-rushing, and that's a good job.
🎀 PLOT:
Your plot, your business. For as long as you can justify the story, it's alright. I don't have a say on that one.
🎀 CONTENT:
You have a playful, wide range of vocabulary. I read some colorful word choices and damn, it's so engaging. Only that it's a bit over the top, so tone it down a little.
🎀 MESSAGE FROM THE CRITIC:
Keep it up. I didn't know why'd you even put it for a critique.
