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Username: Zyva_aahil
Book Title: My Another Half (A Muslim Story)
Total: 41
Review: The book all in all has a good plot! I could have enjoyed better if they were written with a little more clear and with correct punctuation. The start of the chapter could've been better. I think the author didn't have a format in her writing and maybe should make a format and sort things between how she should write. Attention can be brought to World Building and Settings. She should give meanings to the other languages she uses in the story since, many readers aren't aware of it. There were many mistakes related to punctuation and proper nouns eg; the names are written in small letters (e.g. hoor, tanu etc). The cover could be made better and there was no blurb. The description could be more specific and detailed.
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Username: LilySerenaSchreave
Book Title: The Girl with Two Sides
Total: 65
Review: First, I absolutely love your style. Story can be improved by having a broader view through reading books of your genre. It's a nice thought and can be quite unique with a little plot twists and try putting some cliffhangers! More character development is important. It will look good. Punctuation is good and writing style can be better. Try reading good books from great authors. The blurb should have been given split into two or more paragraphs to look inviting. The protagonist is good and is quite a quirky side to it. IT has some unexpected styles which is appreciated. All in all, it's a simple book and can be made unique by minute modifications.
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Username: TemptedHeart
Book Title: Hibernate
Total: 65
Review: First, The writing style, I loved it. There was no blurb and the description could be far more better. I like the narrative style in which the author wrote...but it tends to get boring because of lack of conversations between other people. One will not understand where the story is heading to...I suggest her to read books to help her create a plot-line. The punctuation is fabulous and she has no mistakes in her writing. Character development is needed and change in POV's is suggested. The story is absolutely UNIQUE in every way possible. The author will do serious progress if she knows how to fix her tiny problems. Amazing read!
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Username: Queen_Neisha_boo
Book Title: Best Friends Forever
Total: 59
Review: First, I love the story but it's not something unique....like I feel like I know what will be the plot line and by the way the story is heading I am betting on it. But still, it's good and it's real.A few tips here is that make the emotions a little bit more deeper so that the readers can actually feel it....like just leaving the love of your life must be so hard and also the ignorance from Jay for two whole solid months must be hard for Neisha....I want you to describe those feelings a little bit to make it a little good.Punctuation is quite good. I found a mistake in the description....check that out, it will be "were" not "was" and she can add a prologue or just a blurb to get the idea how this book will be. Add cliffhangers in the end of a chapter...it will be very intriguing to read the next part.So, all to all I liked her book. It's simple and yet with a plot that's quite good and if she can try to make it unique by plot twist then this book will be absolutely amazing I say! I would suggest to read some good published books to improve your writing skills!
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Username: Ricarana1
Book Title: Breaking Point: Darkness Within
Total: 64
Review: The book has a fresh plot. There's lack of blurb which might not attract some readers. The character development is rarely visible. The punctuation can use improvement. The timelines can get confusing. The theme is very mature and I would suggest the author to mention it in the description box as a warning. The story can be a whole lot better if it is written with a broader idea. I would suggest the author to read books related to their genre and organize a format before starting..it will play a key role in your style!
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Username: The_Weird_Imaginator
Book Title: The Perks of Being Weird
Total: 72
Review: The cover is attractive. The idea of the story is very unique, which is interesting. The rhythm of the book is smooth. I found some plot holes which can be avoided. I was confused upon the scene where, the girls walked into the table in cafeteria. I would suggest a background sketch to cover up the plot hole. The blurb can be more elaborate. The writing seem more elegant, if it were not rushed. Grammar and choice of words is top-notch!
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