Alright, I'm curious as to how many of you are reading the revision. I'm really wanting feedback on it, as I'm not quite sure if I'm getting the dialog across well enough or if it is indeed easily understand and clear writing.
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FanfictionHiccup Haddock, not the pride of the village as everyone believes, has his final Dragon Training trial tomorrow. What will happen if he goes missing? He is doing something treasonous, after all, he is befriending a night fury. His decision to leave...
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Alright, I'm curious as to how many of you are reading the revision. I'm really wanting feedback on it, as I'm not quite sure if I'm getting the dialog across well enough or if it is indeed easily understand and clear writing.