1) What's your favorite parts of this story?
2) What aspects would you like to see expanded upon?
3) In what ways can I improve my writing?
4) Do you think this story should have a very different "timeline"? (Not lead into HTTYD3)
4b) If so, what would you be interested in seeing?
5) Is there something that hasn't made sense in the story?
6) Would you like to see more Norse/Viking mythology used?
7) Any ideas on how I can get Berk to accept dragons?
8) It's already a fairly lengthy read, should it be longer, though?
9) What genres would you describe this work as?
10) Favorite line or quip from The Hidden World?
Concerning the Revision:
1) Is the link usable?
2) Are you able to comment on the Doc?
3) Is it easier to read/follow?
4) Do characters still need work/more characterization?
5) Should I go into more detail on how the characters have changed since Hiccup's "death?"
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FanfictionHiccup Haddock, not the pride of the village as everyone believes, has his final Dragon Training trial tomorrow. What will happen if he goes missing? He is doing something treasonous, after all, he is befriending a night fury. His decision to leave...