Critique: Playing Pretend

34 2 1
                                    

Title: Playing Pretend

Author: StorybookHorror

Genre: General Fiction, Adventure, Romance, Suspense

Cover: LOVE IT. Love how it's black and white.

Summary: Sweet and straight to the point. States the topic. 

Chapter 1: Very interesting. I've never read something like this before.

Overall rate: 5 💙💙💙💙 💙

This story has TONS of potential. When I have time I'll read more. I can see this becoming the next Netflix series hit.

Rating Scale: Rate from 1-5
💙💙💙💙💙
1: Poor/Needs MAJOR editing
2:Almost there/ needs fixing/need practice
3: Good/Needs a little editing
4:Good/Needs a little editing/may recommend/may read on
5: EXCELLENT/will recommend to followers, friends/may read on

Critique And Editing InfoWhere stories live. Discover now