Title: The King and The War Dancer
Author: TONYANN
Genre: Fantasy, Erotic, Romance, Short Story
Cover: Sets what type of dancer she is. Love the change of front.
Summary: Sweet and straight to the point.
Chapter 1: OMG the dancing I can imagine her dancing. The slow change of thinking she's performing for a crowd and then to only be dancing in front of one man.
Chapter 2: One word.. Oh Snap...This King is one Badass
Chapter 3: OMG
Chapter 4: Woah
Chapter 5: SHIP IT!!
Chapter 6: Oh Snap..Brother
Chapter 7: Coward move, but needed to be done
Chapter 8: My heart!
Overall rate: 4.5 💙💙💙💙 <
Amazing word choice. OMG as you can tell above, I read this whole short story. I couldn't stop reading it. I was a little bit confused about her born curse. You might need to explain that differently or it could just be me. Some words misspelled, just read through it.
Rating Scale: Rate from 1-5
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1: Poor/Needs MAJOR editing
2:Almost there/ needs fixing/need practice
3: Good/Needs a little editing
4:Good/Needs a little editing/may recommend/may read on
5: EXCELLENT/will recommend to followers, friends/may read on