Author: larrystillalive
Category: Fanfiction
Before:
Your cover is okay, although its missing your name.
Your synopsis needs to be worked on, your have punctuation and grammatical errors. If you need help there is this amazing person that helps edit my work, she is lanaroj. You can check her out and ask for help.
Although, your synopsis is good. Brief, and precise.
After:
I have already mentioned punctuation and grammar so I am not going to mention this again. But seriously your punctuations needs to be worked on.
Let's talk about character development. I think you assume that your readers know exactly what everyone looks like because its freaking 1D. You shouldn't assume this. People like me feel no attachment whatsoever to your characters because, they are underdeveloped. Yeah, I don't really listen to One Direction :)
Not really my stuff so I don't think I'll read on, although people who like 1D will enjoy this.
Next: Surface
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Non-FictionHere you can request for me to read your story and I will write down what I think about it, and how it helped me grow as an aspiring writer. Cover by lanaroj
