Author: gay-boy-forever
Category: Fanfiction
Before:
Your cover is cool. Although your real name instead of your username would be more professional.
Your synopsis is precise, I like it.
I like the book idea. I love cooking contests, my favorite is Chopped, whose with me?!
After:
I liked the first Chapter, I would have loved it more if it was a bit longer and more detailed. Generally you kept me in suspense.
Am going to PM you your typos because that's what you want. Thanks for requesting a review.
I'll read on.
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Read Me (Open)
Документальная прозаHere you can request for me to read your story and I will write down what I think about it, and how it helped me grow as an aspiring writer. Cover by lanaroj
