CHAPTER 28

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POV Mark:
Loren's even more beautiful than the last time I saw her. Excited to be going to Disney for the first time!
Loren: "what's there to do on a Thursday in Virginia?"
Jacob: "there's a midget golf course nearby. That could be fun!"
Liz: "yesss!!"
Jacob: "it's too far to walk, but we can go by bike. I only have 2 and i have 2 longboards."
Loren: "i'll bike, can we just walk in without a reservation?"
Jacob: "yes, we'll have to pay afterwards."
Liz: "can i go on a longboard?!"
Me: "can you do that?!"
Liz: "yes, i love it!"
Me: "cool! Loren and i'll bike and you and Jacob will go by longboard."
We walk into the garage and search for the bikes and longboards.
Jacob: "it's my sister's bike by the way."
Loren: "i found it!....o no it has a flat tire!"
Me: "you can go on the carrier on my bike if you like!"
Loren: "okay! If you drive safe!"
I tell my mom we're going and off we go. It's about 15 minutes. I start biking real fast.
Loren: "wow, watch out!"
She holds my waist and presses her head against my back. I love this. She makes me forget all about Liz!
Jacob: "Liz, you're so good at this!"
Liz: "thanks!"
We arrive at the midget golf course.
Jacob: "i forgot to tell you it's glow in the dark!"
Loren: "cooool!"
We get inside and get a golf stick.
Some lady: "would you also like some glow in the dark pens?"
Me: "yes, please!"
Loren: "that would be a cool picture!"
We start playing. There's a whole story around it. You're in the sea and a mermaid-singer gets kidnapped. To get her back you need to follow the whole course. It's pretty cool!
Loren: "i suck at this! Someone teach me!"
Me: "well you just have to aim at where you want your ball to go."
Loren: "i'm doing that, but it's not working, help meee!"
Me: "o, how can i do this?! Ehm..."
I stand behind her and put my arms around her on with my hands on her hands the stick. (I know, so cheesy.)
Loren: "Hihi...Mark..."
POV Loren:
I'm feeling so many butterflies.
Me: "hihi...Mark..."
Mark: "yes, Loren?"
Me: "i ehm..."
Mark: "yes?"
Me: "i think i'm in love again."
Mark: "me too."
POV Mark:
I'm gonna kiss her. I have to. I look her deep into her eyes. I lean in. She leans in. Our lips slowly touch and i gently kiss her. She turns around to me and puts her arms around me. She stands on my feet. I walk us against the wall. I love her, i know it. We stop and smile.
Me: "wow."
POV Loren:
Me: "wow."
Jacob: "we have everything on camera!"
Me: "huh, what? O, haha."
Liz: "that was the cutest thing!"
Jacob: "you should totally post that on instagram to make Joey jealous."
O, right. Joey. Totally forgot about him. I don't like him anymore, he did stupid things. Right now i'm just focussed on Mark. I love him!

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