Flaws in Fanfics Percy Jackson Edition

Demigods react #4

Hey it's me Luna Hunter Wolf Moon

Percy- NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

The Skywalkers- are we related"

Me- NO you belong in a galaxy far far away

and I'm a daughter of Artemis

Artemis- Apollo

Apollo- yes sis

Artemis- lets go to Tarturus again

Apollo- ............*whispers* but it's so dark there

Artemis- *Puppy dog eyes*

Apollo- fine

so I was making out with my boyfriend Percy Jackson

Percy - that's it *jumps into Tarturus with Apollo and Artemis"

he's like totes hot

Percy- *in Tarturus * #2GlamToGiveDam

when Annabeth came running

Annabeth- your the one who's gonna be running

Reyna- Annabeth calm down *nervous look * we don't want it to be like last time when you tore up half of New Rome with your bare hands *remembers horror *

"Hey get away from Percy "

Annabeth- you better

Nico- uhhhh....I think we better hide

Percy Apollo and Artemis -*comw out of Tarturus * *look at half destroyed camp* what did we miss

I pulled out my sword and scared she ran away sobbing

Luke- DELUSIONAL CHILD

Omg she was such a crybaby

Thalia- DELUSIONAL CHILD

Then Percy and I went to the big house becuZ the gods said we had to go to school

Jason- the fates are cruel

and they built a mansion for

Piper- since when are they so nice

Aphrodite- we are nice

Piper - keep dreaming

us when we got there we all looked at our rooms nine was silver with arrows

Cecil- decent room

and there was a a bed made out of silver
Hazel-*summons bed* YOU NOW HAVE NO WHERE TO SLEEP

Frank- I've never seen this side of her

Nico- it's the Hades in her coming out

the closet was full of clothes chosen by Aphrodite

Aphrodite- at least someone appreciates me

and a note from the gods saying that they loved me

Gods- LOL NO

Awwww