Flaws in Fanfics Percy Jackson Edition

Demigods react #2

Hi my name is Luna Hunter Wolf Moon and as you can guess I'm a daughter of Artemis

Artemis- NOOOOOO *jumps into Tartarus *

Apollo- I'm will not let you fall *jumps into Tarturus

Artemis- you didn't have to do that

Apollo- you didn't think I was gonna let you go in the pit alone did ya

Aphrodite- sooo sweet

Artemis - I love you bro

Apollo- I love you too sis

Universe- awwww

*one week later *

Apollo and Artemis- we're back

Universe-*still crying because of
Sweetness

Apollo and Artemis- ......

and I'm blessed by all the gods since I saved Olympus I'm also a magician and I host all the gods

Carter- that is impossible

Percy- BRO*bear hug*

Carter-.......

Gods- WE WILL NEVER BLESS HER

I looked into the mirror at my reflection I had long black hair and silver orbs my skin was pale.

Nico- plz don't be like last one *cringes*

Annabeth- great another model

I was wearing a silver shirt with jeans I tied my hair in a money
Piper- she at least sounds like a tomboy

Rachel- yeah

Clarisse- sure

and went to meet my best friend Mystic corner who's a daughter of Hecate

Lou Ellen- okay

and she like me is blessed by all the gods

Gods- NADAA

so we started training and I fought Annabeth

Annabeth- ready to die

Everybody in CHB and CJ- ANNABETH ANNABETH ANNABETH ANNABETH

(I absolutely hate her)

Annabeth- I hate you too *makes everyone back away in fear*

and totally beat her

Thalia- this girl is delusional

Luke- yeah

Percy- I think she needs a doctor

and Percy came running to me like
"OMG WILL YOU MARRY ME"

Percy- kill me now

I said yes then Chiron called us for the new prophecy
Three shall go to kill Gaea one shall die and two shall live they will get married and one will live forever

Rachel- these words cannot come out of my mouth

Apollo- This is trash

Spirit of Delphi- I know right

So Chiron sent Annabeth Percy and me
I hope Annabeth dies and me and Percy get married and I live forever and little du I know it was true I killed Gaea again Annabeth was so weak she died after two battles me and Percy had kids
Charlie moon Jackson and Charlotte moon Jackson they were twins and I became immortal

Universe- THE HECK