Flaws in Fanfics Percy Jackson Edition

The OC rules

I published my first fanfic
Please read and tell me how bad it is don't worry about hurting my feelings
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1.OCs must fit into the fandom they can't just be there since the beginning unless it's a AU

2. They can't be too powerful

Zues- Daughter of Posieden who's a witch and a magician *eats chips with one hand throws lightning with other*

3. MUST THEY BE PERFECT
I looked at my perfect reflection in the mirror.

GIRL YOUR NOT APHRODITE

4. No you may not faint

Faint every five seconds