chapter ten

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Just another reminder of how much i love you.
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Both families were ready to go to rathore's village as they plan.

Deepak sharma's family were in one car except kritika as she will go with abhimanyu as there parents decided.

Rathore's family were in other car, except abhimanyu and shravan.

sharvan didn't agree to come with them, as he don't want to be with all this rituals and gathering.
( he still doesn't know about kritika)

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after a long journey they were in punjab .

The evening was so beautiful, fresh village air was hitting kritika's face.

Apka gav koncha hai? Abhimanyu ask while focusing in road as he was driving

Alampur .. She said still looking outside of window.

Abhimanyu thought she is still uncomfortable with him, but.

Gav ki hawaya kuch zada hee fresh hoti haina. She said and smile.

seeing her smile abhimanyu also smile and nod.

He turn on music, to make environment nice .

it's my favourite song. He said and kritika nod.

Lyrics..

There's no touch or feeling
pleasure or pain
anything like the way you runnin through my veins
no breath or beauty
no sound or sight
that ever made me feel the way you do tonight

i just can't take me eyes off you
tell me anything you wanna do
i just can't take me eyes off you
nothing i can do about it
nothing i can do about it

Kritika cheeks were red, as abhimanyu was singing with song.

Abhimanyu saw and chuckles lightly.

It was almost night time.

The climate was giving raining hints, little little water droplet were touching ground.

i think it's gonna be rain. Kritika said in whisper.

soon it was raining, suddenly car was stop in the middle of road.

what happen? Kritika ask worrily.

you seat here I'll check.. He said and open door.

the car was stuck in mud it was difficult to take the car out of mud, specially when it's dark.

He sigh.

The car is stuck, can't see anything in dark.. Abhimanyu said to kritika.

what are we gonna do? She asks,
she was rubbing her arms as it was cold outside.

Soon there was man coming with his bulllock carts.

Apki gadi karab hue hai? The village man said.

haa yaa kichad ma phaas gayi hai. Abhimanyu said.

kaha jana hai apko? Village man said

Badi havali.

Bet jau ma apko chood tha hu, itna barish ma yaha paar koyi nahi aata hai. He said and both nod.

kritika was rubbing her arms she was freezing in cold, and she was soaked in rain.

abhimanyu remove his coat and wrap it around her.

Yaa kyu? Ma tik hu.. She said about to take it off.

when abhimanyu hold her hand to stop her, they both were looking at eachother deeply, abhimanyu eyes were looking at kritika with so much affections

Kritika shyly look down .

abhimanyu, touch her cheeks lightly, and she look at him with doe eyes.

he came forward and kiss her forehead lovingly, kritika close her eyes feeling abhimanyu's love.

He softly pulls her towards him and wrap his hand around kritika arms lightly and they both relaxing and feeling each other warmth.






To be continue...

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