Mini-Awards WINNERS - Best Blurb

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🥇 1st place winner 🥇

CINNAMON BAY  by Pinksands1996

Plot clarity 10/10

Intrigue 10/10

Grammar and punctuation 10/10

Persuasiveness 10/10

Overall score 40/40

The blurb provides enough information to give a sense of the plot without revealing key twists. It presents strong and complex characters, which would appeal to fans of the genre.

Even those who aren't avid readers of this type of book would likely be intrigued enough to give it a try.

I didn't notice any grammar or punctuation mistakes, and based solely on the blurb, I would definitely read it.

 I didn't notice any grammar or punctuation mistakes, and based solely on the blurb, I would definitely read it

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🥈2nd place winner🥈

LOVE BEYOND THE STAGE LIGHTS by TaeTaeGinger

Plot clarity 10/10

Intrigue 9/10

Grammar and punctuation 8/10

Persuasiveness 10/10

Overall score 37/40

The story sets up a real page-turner with some solid characters and tension. It's got all the good stuff—intrigue, complicated characters, and a bit of forbidden romance thrown in. 

Plus, that ending leaves you hanging! 

The writing's pretty solid, though there are a few commas in weird places. Honestly, I'd totally pick up this book just from reading the blurb.

 Honestly, I'd totally pick up this book just from reading the blurb

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🥉3rd place winner🥉

JE T'AIME, IMBÉCILE by strawberry1d

Plot clarity 9/10

Intrigue 10/10

Grammar and punctuation 8/10

Persuasiveness 9/10

Overall score 36/40

The blurb does a good job of introducing the main conflict between the characters. Overall, it sets up an interesting romantic drama, but it could use more details about why they're at odds, how they resolve things, and what drives them. 

The setup is intriguing, with unexpected twists and turns, romantic tension, and some interesting characters. Some sentences are a bit long and could be simpler. 

For example, instead of saying, "She couldn't believe her misfortune when she was forced to work as a maid in a hotel during her precious working vacation due to a little mishap, turning the handsome CEO's life into an unexpected roller coaster ride," it could be split into two sentences for clarity.

 I'd definitely give this book a shot based on the blurb.

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