chapter 5: meeting the heroine...again(rewritten)

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T.D:-dated to fight me, huh!?

Y/N opens his mouth and was about to say something but got interrupted

M.T.D: I am a ghost that lives inside of a DUMMY

Y/N then sets me down, and whispers something to me, and i nod, and M.T.D notices it

M.T.D: HEY!! I'm giving off my evil dialogue here!*ahem* so as I was saying. My cousin used to live inside a DUMMY too. Until...

I just sit on a garbage pile that was behind me, while Y/N just stands there not listening to a word it says, as he just stares at it.

M.T.D:YOU CAME ALONG! When you talked to them, they thought they were in for a nice chat... But the things you SAID...!Horrible. Shocking! UNBELIEVABLE! It spooked them right out of there dummy! HUMAN! I'll scare your SOUL out of your body!

When Y/N heard that he got a bit mad and angry at the dummy, when I mean mad I mean really mad

Y/N: so *cracks knuckles* have you forgotten about me?

He then slams his tail on the water, making a crack on the ceiling as it breaks and a waterfall effect happens, and he uses this chance to make his intimidation display

He then slams his tail on the water, making a crack on the ceiling as it breaks and a waterfall effect happens, and he uses this chance to make his intimidation display

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His glowing eyes stares at the mad dummy's soul

When M.T.D sees this they immediately start shaking

M.T.D: T-t-tha-t i-is-nt i-n-intimi-d-dating a-at a-all!

They then hear another slam and they see a glowing tail behind him, and they then hear another sound

As the breath fires and narrowly misses  M.T.D, as they look behind them there eyes widened as the wall behind them was completely destroyed and burnt, and when they turned back they see Y/N's face in front of them

Y/N: Boo

M.T.D screams, and there soul comes out of the dummy for a few seconds and then they ran

I saw the entire thing and was in awe, and now wondering what kind of abilities he still has up in his sleeve

Y/N: wow *cracks neck and back* I have not done that in.a.while especially my magic breath, well that took quite a bit of my energy *turns to frisk* pretty cool right?*smiles*

I just nod in amazement

Just then another ghost arrives and i knew him, it was napstablook, napstablook then said that they can come to his house or not, and we both agree

Small time skip

After the hangout with napstablook, we then meet gerson, after talking with him for a bit we then leave, but without buying some sea teas and a few crab apples. We then find some more ancient monster, text as Y/N reads it while walking

Y/N: hurt,beaten and fearful for our lives, we surrendered to the humans. Seven of their greatest magicians sealed us underground with a magic spell. Anything can enter through the seal but only beings with a powerful SOUL can leave...there is only one way to reverse this spell. If a huge power, equivalent to seven human SOUL's attack the barrier.. it will be destroyed...But this cursed place has no entrances or exits. There is no way a human could come here. We will remain trapped down here forever

After he finished reading, we then cross the final riverbed

Small time skip

3rd POV

After getting out of temmie village, they then walked out to the next room, where it was just dark they then stumble on an echo flower

Echo flower: Behind you

Just then everything lit up and they come face to face with undyne

Just then everything lit up and they come face to face with undyne

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Undyne: seven. Seven human souls
With the power of seven human souls, our king... King ASGORE Dreemurr... Will become a god with that power. ASGORE can finally shatter the barrier. He will finally take the surface back from humanity... And give them back the suffering and pain that we have endured... Understand, human? *Then looks at Y/N* and YOU do you understand?

Both frisk and Y/N nod

Undyne:good *turns to frisk*this is your only chance at redemption, give up your soul ... Or I'll tear it from your body.

She then goes into a stance and summons her spear, and frisk grabs onto Y/N shaking a slight bit, and then undyne runs...

Only to nearly stab M.k in the eye

M.k: Undyne!!! I'll help you fight!!!

He then looks at undyne, and then at them

M.k: YO!!!! You did it!!! Undyne is RIGHT in front of you!!! You've got front row seats to her fight!!! .... Wait who she's fighting???

Undyne then made her spear disappear, and grabs M.k by the cheek, and drags him away

Y/N and frisk just had a look that just said" wtf" and after that they then walk up to the lit up path

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Author: Done finally, as it turns out that I can just write another chapter, get half way done, and continue it tomorrow
Also do you guys want me to rewrite the first chapters or should I just leave them be?

Yes

Or

No

Anyways I hoped you guys enjoyed today's chapter and again Toby fox owns undertale. That's all I'll see you guys in the next chapter

( Edit: done, yeah this is going a lot faster than I anticipated, rewriting everything all the way to the current chapter, welp that's all I hoped you guys enjoyed today's chapter, and I'll see you guys in the next chapter

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