You've worked on it: an image, a scene.
You rewrote that sentence, put a word in, took a word out, changed the adjectives, added an adverb, removed an adverb. Changed from passive to active voice.
It's STILL a flat sentence.
I used the Bump tool and the Warp tool on the image of the skirt, and changed the color and darkened some of the folds and lightened others.
It was still flat wrong.
The solution? Start fresh. DELETE the sentence. Take another picture altogether.
Begin from SCRATCH.
With GUSTO.
What you've learned from mistakes makes magic happen the next time.
YOU ARE READING
Drabbles 100 Words
Non-FictionSince drabbles are a popular form, I'm making a place to store mine. I'm changing this to op ed pieces in 100 words. Occasionally (like the first part), some fiction will leak in. But I'll quarantine it with quotes and some non-fiction words around...
