✧ Reviewer :: Chaotic_Lals
✧ Reviewee :: onestraykid
✧ Book :: The Hesitants══════════════════
◖Basics :: 10.5 | 20◗
⚘ Cover :: 01 | 05
◍ The cover . . . could be way better. All the elements in it, including the background clashed with each other. The fonts, picture selection — everything. I suggest you re-design the cover, to one that suits the book and correlates with it. There're plenty of graphics shops on Wattpad so you've no trouble.
⚘ Synopsis :: 03 | 05
◍ The synopsis was good. It didn't have me fall for the book, but it was still good. There are some errors that I did notice, however. First paragraph, the usage of ellipsis was wrongly numbered. Second paragraph, use 'Y/N', instead of 'Y/n'. In 'long - cherished' the space between the words & hyphen, isn't needed. After the semi colon, the 'I' in 'including' shouldn't be capitalized. There was also a lexical error. The term 'plausible' doesn't suit with its given usage in the first paragraph. 'Possible' would be better.
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