《 Into The World 》

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✧ Reviewer :: BTS7ARMY8FOREVER✧ Reviewee :: RookWri78✧ Book :: Into The World

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✧ Reviewer :: BTS7ARMY8FOREVER
✧ Reviewee :: RookWri78
✧ Book :: Into The World

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Basics :: 10 | 20

⚘ Cover :: 1.5 | 05

◍ The cover isn't eye-catching. It doesn't even go with the story or the theme or the genre. It doesn't even have a matching font, that'd suit the genre. The picture you've used doesn't go with the story. Use something more relevant. It won't attract readers.

⚘ Synopsis :: 2.5 | 05

◍ The synopsis is fine but not very interesting or engaging. Add something that'd make people interested. It is short, make it longer. Also, add in a scene with a cliffhanger and a few dialogues. You can add the favorite part of the story too, just make sure it doesn't give any spoilers.

⚘ Title :: 03 | 05

◍ I suppose it goes well with the story and matches the theme. It will also attract people to read it. The title is quite cool and gives a vibe of a story with the, 'positivity/life lesson', theme, like, Ikigai and sometimes sci-fi vibes. And i think the technology in this is so high, that it goes with it in an amazing way.

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