《 The Magic Behind Her Eyes 》

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✧ Reviewer :: 112313Parnika✧ Reviewee :: Kitty-Writer✧ Book :: The Magic Behind Her Eyes

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✧ Reviewer :: 112313Parnika
✧ Reviewee :: Kitty-Writer
✧ Book :: The Magic Behind Her Eyes

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Basics :: 14.5 | 20

⚘ Cover :: 02 | 05

◍ The cover though looked creative but it didn't spark that interest inside me which it should have. The problem arises when the elements, or the whole cover doesn't match the story well. I think, you have used an image of a castle which is not that related to the story. Now if you think of your title of the book, it is totally opposite to what clue the cover gives about the book. Try to match these two things with each other and of course the plot so that it looks attractive. You can use eyes or a matching face claim in your story.

⚘ Synopsis :: 04 | 05

◍ I think the blurb was good. You wrote the required information of the story without over writing it. And it was enough to spark interest in readers. But I think for more attention towards the story, you can add some hints to the story as to what new can readers read in this story.

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