《 A Larvikite for a Soul 》

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✧ Reviewer :: BTS7ARMY8FOREVER✧ Reviewee :: _sashi✧ Book :: A Larvikite for a Soul

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✧ Reviewer :: BTS7ARMY8FOREVER
✧ Reviewee :: _sashi
✧ Book :: A Larvikite for a Soul

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Basics :: 13.5 | 20

⚘ Cover :: 2.5 | 05

◍ I don't see how the picture used it related with the theme and the name of the story, like it does match with the thing that Anana the main character is a girl, hut something more relevant could ne used. The picture used isn't of good quality either. The font shade isn't visible and a better color could be chosen, try for something dark or with more opacity. You must use a picture that goes with the theme or the name. However everything that should be in a cover, is present, it'll still attract readers.

⚘ Synopsis :: 04 | 05

◍ The synopsis is small, make it long, that's all lacking in it. It has a dialogue which is a must just add in a scene with a cliffhanger to make it longer. It does not give off much of the plot and only as much as needed, i like that part and i must as well say it will get readers attracted to it.

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