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◍ The cover doesn't look very pleasing to the eyes, but it's good. Except for the fonts, it's looking good. You can use better fonts for both the title and the author's name. They look ordinary and not very pleasant. Except for the fonts, the cover is good and matches the story's theme.
⚘ Synopsis :: 4.5 | 05
◍ The synopsis is just beautiful. The way you've written it, it's really attractive. It's not very long nor very short. It's perfect.
⚘ Title :: 04 | 05
◍ Accurate and suitable, also matches the story.
⚘ Execution :: 04 | 05
◍ I must say you've amazingly executed the book. The way you describe everything, it's beautiful. The staring, the banners, covers are so aesthetic.
○ Plot & Creativity :: 08 | 10
◍ The plot is new and creative. It does have an interesting plot. It's efficient too.
○ Writing Style :: 09 | 10
◍ Your writing is descriptive and detailed. Just a thing, When it's someone's thought, you can use italic fonts, commas or something else to show it as a thought so the reader doesn't get confused with the paragraphs or the thoughts. Then, I loved how you described every little thing and so, it's pleasing to read. Your writing is accurate.
◖Grammar & Vocabulary :: 19 | 20◗
⚘ Grammar :: 9.5 | 10
◍ Your grammar is pretty much perfect. I didn't find any spelling errors or any grammatical errors either.
⚘ Vocabulary :: 9.5 | 10
◍ You have a great vocabulary. It's complex and satisfactory.
○ Emotions Conveyed :: 09 | 10
◍ Due to your writing being great, and the emotions of every character, it's good. It's easy to connect to the characters. You've exactly described everything, which is amazing.
○ Character Development :: 07 | 10
◍ Since there are not many chapters, just 11, there are not many developments in characters but yeah, it shows. Viewing the story, for now, there are no advancements in characters, but hope that changes further.
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Total :: 67.5 | 80
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