《 Your Devil: A Doomed Catastrophe 》

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✧ Reviewer :: LunaticLxna✧ Reviewee :: Pviscelle✧ Book :: Your Devil: A Doomed Catastrophe

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✧ Reviewer :: LunaticLxna
✧ Reviewee :: Pviscelle
✧ Book :: Your Devil: A Doomed Catastrophe

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Basics :: 14 | 20

⚘ Cover :: 03 | 05

◍ I think the cover is pretty good, but adding a good filter will make the face claim's pictures blend, their skin tones are different, which looks quite off. Other than that, I think the fonts look quite basic, they could have been better. Except for this, I think the cover is good.

⚘ Synopsis :: 04 | 05

◍ It is really beautifully written, it's very good and pretty interesting. Overall it's good, but can be written more creatively.

⚘ Title :: 03 | 05

◍ I think it's too long, that's not a problem, but you can make it shorter and there are some fluent words so it would be good if you write their meanings in the description, after dialogues.

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