《 Rise of The Night Witch 》

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✧ Reviewer :: LunaticLxna✧ Reviewee :: PASharp✧ Book :: Rise of The Night Witch

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✧ Reviewer :: LunaticLxna
✧ Reviewee :: PASharp
✧ Book :: Rise of The Night Witch

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Basics :: 16 | 20

⚘ Cover :: 02 | 05

◍ The font used is really thin, it makes it quite blurred. So instead, you can use a bolder form of the same font or any other bold font. In the face claim you've used, her half body is only visible on the cover, so make sure that she's fully visible. Then, I think you've not added filters, so the blending doesn't look good, the filter blends the editing and makes the cover look prettier. The font of 'The rise of' is just so small it looks like the author's name. That's all, except that the cover is good and matches the story's theme.

⚘ Synopsis :: 03 | 05

◍ The synopsis is good and gives the reader an idea about the story. But you know you've amazingly written the book, I think you can write a better blurb. So just go through the description again and make it better. Also, the description is getting too long, the part about the story is just three paragraphs but you've written a long paragraph after it too, which shouldn't be included in the blurb part. Since those are necessary you can just write that in the intro part.

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