The Game Masters : A Review Shop

《 Unsee 》

✧ Reviewer :: CoolWhenUrBatman
✧ Reviewee :: Inky_Jin
✧ Book :: Unsee

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◖Basics :: 13.5 | 20◗

⚘ Cover :: 03 | 05

◍ It's aesthetically pleasing, the only problem is the author's name and subtitle which can hardly be seen, especially the subtitle.

⚘ Synopsis :: 03 | 05

◍ Very intriguing, but I think it's lacking plot wise to draw in readers attention. The interesting part for me was the first part of the synopsis, the second part could be a little more informative while remaining mysterious to get readers attention.

⚘ Title :: 4.5 | 05

◍ Fitting & nice.

⚘ Execution :: 03 | 05

◍ Overall it's good, but it could use more interesting factors to draw in and keep the reader's attention.

○ Plot & Creativity :: 08 | 10

◍ It was an interesting plot, you experimented with an idea and brought it to life perfectly. Although I'd advise to use more plot twists—nothing cliché or cringe— to add more spice and to keep the readers interested.

○ Writing Style :: 08 | 10

◍ Standard and informative style, you dive into details which helps the emotional aspect of the story. Only problem is use of italics for dialogues, it's not standard and italics are usually used to either emphasize a word or to imply the text is thoughts of the characters.

◖Grammar & Vocabulary :: 18 | 20◗

⚘ Grammar :: 09 | 10

◍ Very good grammar, all tenses used correctly, commas and full stops placed correctly.

⚘ Vocabulary :: 09 | 10

◍ Wide range of vocabulary and all used perfectly.

○ Emotions Conveyed :: 09 | 10

◍ Due to the writing style it's easy to get a feel of their feelings.

○ Character Development :: 07 | 10

◍ There are only 9 chapters so there's no development but from what I've seen so far from the characters they're all well crafted.

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Total :: 61.5 | 80

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