I hate this story, so spite has driven me to rewrite it.
Changes:
- hinata x oc is now endgame, what was I even thinking dragging in ocs for romance just bc I wanted to drag in ocs
- dylan is too powerful. she must be stopped. she will be stopped at all costs. I swear it on my life.
- won't follow manga word for word bc that's boring soo that means more of a challenge for me and hopefully, more enjoyment for you.
- better characterization. for everyone.
- Ocs Won't Dominate Conversation Bc I Don't Know How To Make Them Talk To Each Other In Character.
- more believable dylan. its an anime fanfic and all but wtf was I thinking. also better backstory for dylan bc the original was wah wah daddy abandoned me at an ice cream stand and now I have abandonment issues wah wah. Yeah. Revamp necessary.
- longer than 1k chapter except the letters. You can't get the idea across better that these are awkward teenagers than the fact that they have no clue what to say to each other.
probably more but it's 2am
first two chapters are finished and posted. listed on my profile as Pen Pals V.2.
Good luck. Maybe I'll finish it this time.
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Pen Pals
Fanfictionto save his grade he became a pen pal to a girl in america. she was bored so she became a pen pal to a boy in miyagi. 《☆☆☆》 no this isn't a romance ff between hinata and my oc, i don't really like those kind of ff. if you're still curious check out...
