In the beginning to Chapter Three, I had written Olivia's house as one-story. Then, I had somehow changed it to two-stories. Don't worry, I will and have fixed those mistakes.
At first, Alex's eyes were blue, and he had brown hair. I had somehow managed to think that Olivia's hair was brown in one of the chapters, and so I fixed it.
Felicity's name has been autocorrected to Felicia a couple of times.
WHEN OLIVIA AND ALEX WERE 15, THE YEAR THEY WERE LIVING IN WAS 2036. With the current evolution of technology, I would think that scientists would find out how to connect brains to wires.
Olivia was able to see her visions in third person because her brain, which was made in a science lab, wasn't finished. When she was on the verge of death, the nurses had to implant a camera into the tech brain, so that she would be able to see. They used their security camera, since it was the closest thing to a camera they could find.
THERE WILL BE NO CONTINUATION OF THE SHIP ALEXIA (Alex and Olivia). ANY SPIN OFFS AND/OR CONTINUATIONS MADE BY READERS MUST HAVE MY PERMISSION.
AGAIN, ASK FOR PERMISSION IF YOU WANT TO PUT THIS BOOK IN A DIFFERENT LANGUAGE.
6/24/17: At first Bri's name was Bri Blues. Then when Olivia and Bri were captured and Alex's dad was about to hurt Bri, I accidentally put her last name as "Owen". I changed the "Blues" from the other chapter to "Owen", or I think I did it visa versa.
I will most likely add more when I edit my story, but thank you anyways.
If you have anything to add in, comment and I'll add it and edit it.
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Scarred Beauty [Completed]
Science FictionNormal isn't a term Olivia Hernandez is familiar with. Her mother is dead to an abnormal disease, leaving her wallowing in scattered memories. Her father is abusive and never sober, leaving her treading through glass shards of beer bottles. There's...