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The Ravisher

The Ravisher

9.8K Reads 95 Votes 8 Part Story
georgiepeorgie By georgiepeorgie Updated Dec 03, 2010

After enduring a kind of suffering never seen by humans, Adelaide is determined to make a new life away from England and her most haunting memories.  She is trying escape not only her past, but also what she is.  Before she even has a chance to start healing, she is found by Will, who - like Adelaide - is not all he appears.  Can he help her healing process, or just hurt her worse?

writerchild95 writerchild95 Jul 15, 2010
hahah jemsparkles right! and i agree totally with the hubba hubba part- i've only said those words on one other comment and i totally mean it HUBBA HUBBA
jemsparkle jemsparkle Jun 01, 2010
OMG! It's like so flippin' amazing I can't even say it in words :D I love it!
                              I love the English words more! First time a Londoner has done this.
jemsparkle jemsparkle Jun 01, 2010
hubba hubba! xD Darling you're oustanding! I only read the first part and I'm hooked! I love the English accent and their bantering,excellent chapter!
gothdetective gothdetective Mar 16, 2010
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OR I'LL EAT YOU WITH A SPOON!! also, the bowles of hell comment, i loled for so long, i had a certain image of a certain someone in my head ;) but yes this story is amazing so please please please please writemore :)
gottalovemonsters gottalovemonsters Mar 12, 2010
P.S. eeek. I just re-read that and that sounds really mental. <grins sheepishly> I'm not normally like that, i swear :P
gottalovemonsters gottalovemonsters Mar 12, 2010
w-o-w. this is actually really good :} It has a really nice balance of funny/witty, seduction and seriousness! it's like...amazing. I love it already! and trust me, that doesn't happen all that often! :] on to the next chapter!!!