My Sire Is A Myth

My Sire Is A Myth

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Vrykólakas By vampyre_24 Updated 3 days ago

A bite Mark is found on her neck and she is thrown into the world of the unknown; she was harmless but harm is done to her now. She's a mild sheep thrown among the wolves.

A dangerous world awaits her, a world she didn't know existed.
 When the submissive falls among the dominating there's no end to the surprises and dangers lurking around.

MrsGboys4ever MrsGboys4ever Jul 15, 2016
Great start here. I enjoy your writing style. My only suggestion would be to try not to start every paragraph with I.
vampyre_24 vampyre_24 May 31, 2016
Depends on where you write if it's a cell phone there's a tool bar above the keyboard and if it's a laptop you have to select the text you want to change and then a tool bar pops up once the text is selected!!
RachidaAnejjar RachidaAnejjar May 29, 2016
If I were her, I wouldn't hide inside a cave, it is so scary :(
RachidaAnejjar RachidaAnejjar May 29, 2016
Oh! But what happened to her? Is she turning to be a vampire or something like that?! Let's see...
                              Anyway Kathy, your writingstyle is awesome, keep going you are really a professional writer, I knew you'll make it :)
Raven_Queen31 Raven_Queen31 Nov 28, 2016
Man, this prologue has got me curious on the last line! It caught my attention, the cruelty and her strength... I look forward to more of this!
Raven_Queen31 Raven_Queen31 Nov 28, 2016
There seem to be some here and there but my grammar suck as well so I cant argue 
                              Nonetheless, I love your writing and I love the start of this story!