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Free at Last or Maybe Not

Free at Last or Maybe Not

603 Reads 14 Votes 2 Part Story
Jinx By Jinx76 Updated Oct 30, 2010

Could you imagine if you were kidnapped at the age of 6, for one year, no? Well Sapphire can. Luckily for her, she was rescued but at a huge price her parents. Some years later 'He' comes back for her, but this time, she doesn't want anyone to help her, mostly not wanting to bring her brothers into it. So she ran away but now after 4 years everything is finally over, or is it?

chairsniffa chairsniffa Jan 02, 2011
Like I said I am here to help ya!!! Send it to me and I can help ya out chairsniffa@gmail.com
chairsniffa chairsniffa Jan 02, 2011
Lol you just wrote then!!! Lol everyone starts somewhere even shakespeares first stories wouldv'e sucked but he worked at it and got better!!!
chairsniffa chairsniffa Dec 31, 2010
Cool mate yer then the dream becomes dreamlike almost!!!! Nice work for a first story anyway mate keep it up!!! Can you read my dream academy mate?
chairsniffa chairsniffa Dec 30, 2010
I guess you could write the start almost as a poem with short, sharp sentences, one sentence paragraphs. Pain and cold sweat. Tears flood my eyes. Crimson stained flagstones. I scream but nothing comes out. And then came the light of freedom.
chairsniffa chairsniffa Dec 30, 2010
On the first page I found My parents were big shots, not big shoots and you also mean well not will in that same paragraph. Had saved and had taken in I think you meant at the bottom of the first page and Though she was more a second mother.
Monika5679 Monika5679 Dec 23, 2010
Please read my story (and fan me and vote)................. "Love is a Liar"
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