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2.5M Reads 129K Votes 125 Part Story
ルイーズ By drippings Completed

He wanted to break her.

Unfortunately, one of her broken shards pierced into him.


Achievement: #1 SHORT STORY
-- More than 10 times since March 2016, thank you all so fucking much.
Sequel: SALT

Oh my Lord this is so beautifully written 
                              It's like once you've finished a paragraph, you have to go back and read it again just to grasp it fully and try and understand it a bit more
                              I'm already obsessed
The first sentence has me hooked. Splendidly written. I've always wanted to write like this. This is like poetry but in prose form - get it? No? Never mind.
HeheCakes HeheCakes 5 days ago
this is so descriptive it makes me want to puke.
                              a very, very good puke with rainbows and skittles.
howellycrap howellycrap Apr 15
First chapter and yet it has made me feel what this girl is feeling, I'm in love with your skill
AUnicornEnthusiast AUnicornEnthusiast Sep 17, 2016
"Short story" but it has 124 parts? This is why I have trust issues
Tangy_lemonade Tangy_lemonade Oct 09, 2016
That moment just the description of the story gives u chills!  Can't  wait to read it😍😍