The Girl That Was Buried In Her Ball Gown

The Girl That Was Buried In Her Ball Gown

20 Part Story 5K Reads 182 Votes
Ian King By dotandtittle Updated Oct 22, 2015

How could one evening at the junior high school ball turn into something completely unexpected.  When something goes terribly wrong, what will happen to a young girl who's world has been turned upside down?  Who can she turn to, who can she trust?  What is it with these others that are trying to impersonate her and leading her to some place she does not want to go.

dotandtittle dotandtittle Mar 21, 2015 08:02AM
@Anniemena constructive critisism though is ALWAYS received gladly. How else do we learn and improve our art?
Anniemena Anniemena Mar 16, 2015 12:08AM
I don't notice any grammar mistakes I just get lost in the story,nobody's books I read will get me correcting them on anything,I just enjoy the story,the plot and the great writing
dotandtittle dotandtittle Mar 15, 2015 09:41PM
@Anniemena Weheeww!  I'm stoked, might have another fan! Oh and by the way, welcome to wattpad :)
Anniemena Anniemena Mar 15, 2015 09:39PM
I absolutely love it so far,I just knew I would,fantastic and definitely makes me want to read more
BekahEva BekahEva Sep 12, 2014 07:17PM
This, in some ways reminds me of my thirteen year old self. 
                                    
                                    You are such a professional writer and really have captured the essence of a young teenager. It is really wonderful to behold. Very well done!
I love the descriptive techniques- 'menacing roar'. This is so sophisticated :)