The Final Goodbye © 2015 (Rough Draft Version) By: J.L. Jacobs

The Final Goodbye © 2015 (Rough Draft Version) By: J.L. Jacobs

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Sophia Lancaster's world was suddenly shattered only moments before her wedding to Jeremy Thompson was to begin. Not only did the cad make a shocking confession to her that he had impregnated another woman, but he also had the nerve to tell Sophia that he felt "honor bound" to marry the other woman! Living in such a small town can be tough on a jilted bride when one's former fiance, and his new wife, also happens to live there, so Sophia prays for a way out and is willing to do almost anything to make that happen.

Travis Ewing is a widower and successful Texas ranch owner with two young children who need a mother. He doesn't desire love; what he wants is a marriage of convenience only. He places an advertisement in the newspaper looking for a mail-order-bride who can meet his requirements: she needs to be able to cook, clean, and help raise his children. 

Not long after her failed wedding, Sophia spots Travis's advertisement and cannot help but think that it was Fate's way of answering her prayers, so she hastily mails a response and lies about her level of experience regarding his requirements in a wife.

Upon her arrival in Texas, Sophia barely gets a proper introduction to Travis before they are married in a quick court house ceremony. Then all hell breaks loose when he learns that Sophia is just some privileged beauty who had admittedly lied about her qualifications. Furious, Travis demands their marriage be dissolved, but Sophia's determined to win him over and does everything she can to show him that she is truly capable of being a rancher's wife and a mother to his children; even if that means she has to hide a shocking medical diagnosis that she received shortly after her arrival in Texas. Follow Sophia's journey through hell and back as she fights for the one thing she truly believes in: Love. 

This is an emotional and suspenseful love story with a twist. It is book #1 in The Lancaster Series. 

*Updating all chapters in 2016.

lyndafloyd lyndafloyd Oct 01
and left the room in a hurry*.* "to do so" is superfluous as you already said she had decided to go after her brother.
lyndafloyd lyndafloyd Oct 01
"as to" does not really add any meaning or clarification here. You could just say "She stared at him intently, giving him her full and undivided attention."
whemike whemike Nov 21
Beautiful story! I can see this is going to be very entertaining! You have the gift to describe emotions. It's like watching it live screen.Thank you for sharing..
persevera persevera Sep 26, 2015
Very dramatic to have  the announcement at the wedding. Sophia seems  a bit  self-centered but that could  jjust be because of the  day. Nice descriptions
Noble05 Noble05 Aug 17, 2015
I found your links on Twitter. Just finished this chapter and so far so good. I'm not completely bored yet.
lissap5150 lissap5150 Jul 15, 2015
This book draws you in so quick! It makes me want to read faster so I can find out what comes next!