Masked

Masked

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Anja By anja_not_anya Updated Mar 21

How are you doing that?" He asked me. His voice sounded like a teenager's, around my age of seventeen years. 

I blinked, confused. "Doing what?" 

"The snowstorm. That." He pointed to the swirling flakes of snow around me. "I- I don't know. I thought you were doing it. You're the super here."

He looked at me like I was dumb. "For some reason I doubt that. Come with me."

Not knowing why, I grabbed my skating bag and followed the Super. "Why? Who are you?"

"I'm Logan, also known as Silver Shadow. You're a Super."



When Amber Coradetti accidentaly releases unknown super powers, she has to turn to her fellow supers to learn to control her new powers and  stop the rising power of the evil that reside within Silver City.

77gem77 77gem77 Jun 15
I love this opening! It says what needs to be said while making it enjoyable for the reader.
Which means you are working for somebody, otherwise there would be no reason to cover up.
JojishiWha JojishiWha Apr 25, 2015
Hi. I'd say you're doing pretty well so far. Your writing is absolutely marvelous. and I don't say that to just anyone, okay? Anyway, you totally had me captivated with the two crooks in the alleyway. Keep writing, this is epic!! Update or else!!  ; )