Undercover agent

Undercover agent

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think_of_a_username By think_of_a_username Updated Jun 13, 2015

A girl with a history that can drive a person mad dives her ford to be the to undercover spy at IAAU. 
She is the top of the field agents and also the best in the interrogation rooms. They say her eyes are so green and strong the criminals or whomever they are interrogating cave almost instantly. 

She is fire. Nobody gets in her way. 
With a history like hers you can only expect the worst but she brings out her best to the table. 
What happens when her boss Mat gives her a job she won't forget. She is a student at East high school. 
Wounds will be opened, walls will be built, hope will be discovered, love will be tested.
Read it all in undercover agent 

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But always remember nothing as it seems. Trust no one. Sleep with one eye open. And hold on tight when the rollercoster comes. 











Most of the chapters are short but there will be lots of them.

Wow, her kidnappers are stupid! 
                              1. They failed to tie her to the chair so she couldn't escape.
                              2. THEY DIDN'T EVEN CHECK HER FOR WEAPONS!? 
                              Those idiots have got to be the stupidest kidnappers ever! Lmao!
That is all very true, but if you believe life is a game you can't win, why are you fighting for yours, and other people's lives?
12Rayne 12Rayne Dec 06, 2015
Warehouse not wear house *quickly puts up hands in defence* don't hurt me! >_<!!
ed2wfu ed2wfu Nov 21, 2015
There is both tension and suspense. Loving it :) Lines were well written. Your writing is sublime.
MermaidHair MermaidHair Apr 04, 2015
Put a comma after "head."
                              "To" should be "too."
                              Put a comma after "fast."
                              "Bossy" should be "boss."
MermaidHair MermaidHair Apr 04, 2015
Put a comma after "and" and a period after "that."
                              Put "I grinned..." into a separate paragraph, along with what comes after it.
                              Put a period after "asked."
                              Capitalize "then" and put a comma after it.
                              Put a comma after "movement."
                              "Through" should be "threw."
                              Put a comma after "knife."