Fate is a Funny Thing(ON HOLD)

Fate is a Funny Thing(ON HOLD)

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ameera By adreameralways Updated Nov 16, 2010

This is a story about a red haired, green eyed girl named Darelyn Melodious Jewel.
Her mother had left her when she was only 11 and now her being 16, she still can't seem to forgive her. Her father re-marries again soon to a blonde haired, blue eyed beauty Sasha Marilyn Pierce, she was happy, until she saw her true face..a person who likes to hurt her for fun. she had been hurt mentally and physically, but then there is a new boy who's her neighbor. she goes through a hell lotta drama which includes boys, family feuds, friends, school life, sibling rivalry..pretty much everything!
But the question is, in the end of all this drama she goes through..does she get all she ever wanted? or does she end up having nothing at all and being unhappy?
This may seem like a typical love story..and this is..but it has twists and turns at the most unexpected time..

adreameralways adreameralways Oct 10, 2010
@darkdestiny thanx 4 commenting and criticizing! but u c the places when she;s talking with her inner voice there's only one quote..that how u spell it right?..instead of double quotes..like when she;s talking there are double quotes and when inside her head it;s single quote..hope so that helps!!
Midnight_Misery96 Midnight_Misery96 Jun 03, 2010
i lovve it!! ya i agree with minnie_057 and Jane_Doe.....dont put too many spaces. other than that its AWESOME!!!
Raaawwrrrr Raaawwrrrr May 05, 2010
good start! a few mispellings and the first paragraph was kind of fast paced, but I like it!
awishrightnow awishrightnow Apr 30, 2010
this is a rlly good start!
                              lotsa promise! 
                              great job! <3 :D